Small Fish Big Fish – a twisty psychological thriller


Small Fish Big Fish is a twisty psychological thriller written for teens and young adults, set in Scotland during the nineteen- sixties.

It’s 1965. The Rolling Stones’ Satisfaction is number one worldwide, Thunderball is setting new box-office records for James Bond movies, and the mini skirt has made its first appearance in London.

Like a lot of teenagers, seventeen-year-old Jamie is struggling to navigate his way through the uncharted waters of growing up: the world of first dates, intimate relationships, trust, self doubt, and hope.

When Jamie discovers some money on the floor of the corner store, he thinks his luck is in. But sometimes, what seems like fortune’s kindly smile is a mask hiding a twisted and cruel face.

And so it is with Jamie. The seemingly innocent decision to keep the money triggers a series of events that traps him in a quagmire of deception and criminality, threatened by a psychopath determined to destroy his life.

Read Small Fish Big Fish and you’ll agree this is one of the best twisty psychological thriller books to portray life as it really was in nineteen sixties Scotland: a time and place where loyalty, and courage are tested to the limit.

Small Fish Big Fish – A thrilling page turner for young adults

a twisty psychological thriller

The Characters

“What a great read, I couldn’t put it down!! Loved the story and all the characters.”

Jamie McCarthy. Doing his best to avoid becoming a victim of the criminal elements in his neighborhood. And so far, the seventeen-year-old has been lucky. That’s about to change…

Archie Stewart. The gang leader with big ideas. He comes from an abusive family: his father is an alcoholic who regularly beats his wife and children, his mother is a floozy, and his sister, Trish hates him. Nineteen-year-old Archie is your nightmare. He will do anything to survive.

Tianyi Chi. Archie’s girlfriend is a fifteen-year-old refugee whose family were lost at sea while trying to escape from China before Mao’s cultural revolution made that impossible. Archie wants to keep the relationship secret, fearful of how it might affect his reputation. Tragedy follows Tianyi around like a shark hunting prey… You can have a free peak at Tianyi’s story in Guilt of the Innocents.

Sandy Morrison. Stephen’s violet-eyed, fun-loving, dream girl has a secret. Her brother, Daniel, is serving nine months in Barlinnie prison for aggravated assault. And he’s about to be released.

Superstars of the 60’s 70’s – who do you recognize?

Small Fish Big Fish is filled with 1960’s references: icons, music and much loved superstars of the small and big screen. See how many you recognize in this montage.

montage of famous people in the 1960's UK and USA
Test your knowledge – who do you recognize?

Top Row: 

Brit Ekland, singer, actress, sex symbol in 60’s and 70’s. Her first role was in GI Blues, starring Elvis Presley. Vladimir Grigoryevich Tretchikoff was an artist whose painting Chinese Girl, popularly known as The Green Lady, is one of the best-selling art prints of the twentieth century. The Rascals, American rock band  of the mid sixties. Notable #1 hits include “Good Lovin'” (1966), “Groovin'” (1967). Inducted into the Rock and Roll hall of fame in 1997. Flower Power – girl offers flower to soldier at anti-Vietnam war protest at the Pentagon, 1967. Best selling 1964 British teen magazine, Jackie featuring “you know who” on the cover. The Rolling Stones with Mick in his element (American tour 1969). Bond, James Bond – Sean Connery in Thunderball. The fab four (of course) – clearly fans of 007. 

Middle Row:

Poet, artist, singer, the Universal Soldier, Mr. Bob Dylan. The Beetles In Manila (1966). The band  received a hostile reaction after slighting Imelda Marcos. Donna Summer, a.k.a. the Queen of Disco had 42 hit singles on the US Billboard top 100 in her lifetime. She died from Cancer in 2012. In the beginning of the 1960’s, the Twist was a worldwide dance phenomenon. Recorded by Chubby Checker, the record became a number 1 hit in both 1960 and 1962. British fashion model and actress, Twiggy, on the cover of American magazine Seventeen. Marvel Comics Superheroes took the USA and the UK by storm in the 1960’s with superhero titles such as Spiderman created by Stan Lee, Jack Kirby, and Steve Ditko. The Assassination of Martin Luther King in 1968 caused massive protests and race riots in over 100 American cities. Dozens of people were killed and thousands of people injured in the rioting.

Third Row:

The Locarno Ballroom in Glasgow was a fantastic dance venue in 1965 and hosted a number of great artists including The Kinks and Eric Burdon and The Animals. (Top)Eric Morecambe and Ernie Wise – popular and much loved entertainers often featured on the London Palladium TV variety show. (Bottom) Troubled but brilliant American soul/blues singer, Janis Joplin. (Top) Who else would have a surfboard that big? The Beach Boys. (Bottom) Martin Luther King and LBJ signing the voting rights act in 1965 which sought to secure the right to vote for racial minorities throughout America. Archie Stewart from the novel, Small Fish Big Fish. BBC music chart program Top of the Pops featuring the Beatles in 1964. President John Fitzgerald Kennedy’s last moments – Dallas, November 22, 1963.

If you’d like to know more about what it was like growing up in the sixties, click here.

If you are looking for a twisty psychological thriller you can’t go past SMALL FISH BIG FISH!

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When a ten-pound note falls at Jamie’s feet, the teenager thinks his luck is in and heads to the fairground for a bit of fun. This is the beginning of a change in Jamie’s fortunes, but not in the way he hopes. Before long, he finds himself on a dark path, trapped by fear, jealousy, and the scheming of bully, Archie Stewart.

Archie has been the victim of fate all his miserable life. He’s looked on as his younger neighbor is given everything handed to him on a plate. All the things Archie has longed for: caring parents, close friends, and a rosy future. Envy eats at Archie It’s time for payback.

A gripping young adult thriller, Small Fish Big Fish, tells of the relationship between a small group of teenagers struggling towards maturity in a seedy suburb of Scotland during the nineteen sixties.

This is a true-to-life drama, written through the eyes of these unique individuals. If you enjoy stories with a compelling cast of characters, suspenseful mystery, and a touch of young romance, then you’ll love PJ McDermott’s twist on the traditional coming of age story.

Judge for yourself whether this is one of the best twisty psychological thriller books set in Scotland! You can get an insight into the motivations of one of the character’s in Guilt of the Innocence.

What Readers Say:

The cast of characters are robust and well- developed, which makes this far more complex than a simple ‘good guy versus bad guy’ scenario. There are times when, as a reader, I found myself sympathizing with characters I wanted to help.

This is a tale with a strong appeal to a wide audience. It includes sex and violence but is not gratuitous; both are an essential part of the plot.

I recommend this book to anyone who remembers the struggle of growing into adulthood.

A. Moran-Soley // Amazon UK

“Small Fish Big Fish meticulously, deliberately, and powerfully describes the chain of events that the decisions and actions of both the protagonist and the antagonist—whether made for the right reasons or wrong—have on themselves, on their neighbors, friends, and those they love.

The reader is brought along the journey, and left to confront the gut-wrenching question—what would I do, given their situation? 

Kayne Milholme // Goodreads

“This book is fantastic any way you look at it and I think it has a very wide appeal. The author’s writing contains the perfect blend of each element of the story. Characters feel like real people and scenery pops off the pages.

As to the story, the main character is a teenager facing very typical issues. You really learn to sympathize with him right away.

He is having a rough time but his luck seemingly turns around when he finds a lot of money. He clearly struggles with how to handle it – does he turn it in, or find a way to spend it carefully without drawing attention?

Then there’s the neighborhood bully who gives him trouble. It really reminds you of those kids from your school days who used to be jerks and rubbed you the wrong way. Seriously, this is a great read and I HIGHLY RECOMMEND IT!”

Doug Egglesten// Goodreads

“McDermott’s writing clearly conveys a solid sense of character, setting and time. I felt like I was really ‘there’ throughout the story. The plot is complex and requires attention, but McDermott’s writing make that easy.

This book has multiple elements: mystery, action, romance, and excellent characterization. If you’re looking for a new and different twist on the coming of age story, read this now!”

PM // Amazon

“Small Fish Big Fish is an absorbing, well crafted novel that follows Jamie as he navigates through a series of difficult obstacles placed before him.

There are a number of memorable characters that enter the story: D, Julie, Archie, and many others, and I found that as the story moved along I became more invested in the outcome of the plot and the fate of the characters.”

K. Kumar // Amazon

Excerpts from the novel:

courage and fear


Archie turned towards them, his face flushed with anger. ‘Where’s the rest of it? This can’t be all you took this week. Fifty-three lousy quid!’ His voice broke as he grasped McIntyre by his shirt. ‘C’mon, tell me, where’s the rest of it?’  He slapped the barely conscious man across the face.

Jamie grabbed hold of Archie’s arm as he swung it backwards for a second hit. ‘No!’ He struggled to hold Archie back and looked defiantly into his eyes. ‘Can’t you see he’s had enough? There isn’t any more. He would have told you by now.’

Archie pulled free of Jamie’s grasp and his fist struck McIntyre like a sledgehammer. As the shopkeeper’s head hit the floor, Archie grabbed his shirtfront and shook him violently.

Jamie wrapped his arms around Archie and struggled to drag him backwards.

Archie lashed out with his boot at McIntyre’s inert body.

‘Enough, for God’s sake! He’s an old man. You’ll kill him,’ Jamie screamed.

Archie swatted him away and Jamie careened across the small room, crashed into the corner of the safe and sank to the floor.

Spasms of pain wracked his back.

representing the excitement of passion


Archie hated his parents, but as he listened to Tianyi, it dawned on him he had been denied something special. 

It made him angry – enough to want to strike out, hurt, and make someone pay. ‘My mother’s a bleeding sot. Do you know what that means? She abandoned us when I was just a kid, eight or nine years old.

‘Oh, I know she had it hard with the old man, but did she think Trish and I had it bloody easy?

‘Every time Dad got pissed he took it out on us. He mostly beat up on me—he just ignored Trish. I know he hates me. I didn’t understand it back then, but later I realized he blamed me for every rotten thing that ever happened to him. 

‘Why? I forced it out of him one night when I was old enough to stand up to him, and he was drunk enough not to care. He says he’s not my father. At least, he thinks he’s not my father.’

Archie’s face was expressionless as he continued. ‘He told me Judy, that’s my mum, gave it out to just about anybody when she was young. That was the only reason he fancied her―the sex. A real whore she was, and she didn’t stop after they were married.’

He laughed bitterly. “I wish he wasn’t my father. I told him to look in the mirror—stupid sod.’

two hearts as one in this contemporary tale


Julie caressed the back of his neck and Jamie’s nervousness disappeared, replaced by a sense of contentment, of being in the right place at the right time, and with the right person.

He was filled with delight when she put both arms around his neck and laid her head against his shoulder. He responded by holding her so tightly, they found it difficult to move.

She laughed in his ear.

Jamie felt as though he had discovered the secret to happiness. Her laugh filled him with unfamiliar but agreeable sensations, but the strength of his feelings both delighted and frightened him.

In the back of his mind, a small voice insisted he didn’t deserve this. There was no way someone as beautiful as Julie could feel that way about him.

tragic endings to the story


Tianyi’s mother had protested the vessel was too small, little more than a wooden fishing trawler, but her father replied she knew nothing of the sea, and the captain had assured him he had made the journey many times without incident.

‘We have no choice in any case,’ he had said. ‘I have paid the money. Either we go now or we stay and starve.’

Her mother gripped Tianyi’s hand so tightly she squirmed.

Her younger brother Shiou was hanging onto his father’s coat, wiping the tears from his eyes, and trying to appear brave.

Tianyi thought she would always remember that moment: the despair of her mother, and the resolution that shone from her father’s eyes.

About the Author: PJ McDermott

PJ McDermott

PJ McDermott lived in Ferguslie Park, the setting for his debut thriller book for teens and young adults, Small Fish Big Fish, until he was fifteen.

At twenty-one he went back to study full-time at Langside College, and from there to Glasgow University, graduating Bachelor of Science.

A regular on the Scottish Folk Club circuit, PJ played guitar and sang with his friends and cousins for pocket money. He lived in Paisley until, at the age of twenty-six, the author met and married Sue, who convinced him to return with her to Australia, a move he has never regretted. 

PJ lives with his wife, Sue, on the Surf Coast of Australia. They have two beautiful daughters, and three seriously cheeky grandchildren.

Small Fish Big Fish: one of the best psychological thriller books with a twist


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